Thursday 23 May 2019
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Hello there James I am Alex and I go to St Patrick school in Greymouth, I really liked the way you how you used words that make me feel like i'm in the story and how I can easily image what is going on in the story while i'm reading it, Plus I love stories about British colonisers invading country's, But one thing maybe next time you could make the text color different because at the end I couldn't really read it, But on the bright side I loved the story, Keep it up
ReplyDeleteThanks Alex I appreciate your feedback
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